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Post by oldgreengrolar on Apr 13, 2023 13:53:36 GMT
Chapter 11: Femenine Fatal.
Unable to move as nobody in his school, much less a feminine fatal would enter bother coming a metre near him. To him this is a whole new experience. Knowing she is a cyber chick did not stop him from experiencing goosebumps, something which a typical boy like him feels when someone out of his league approaches him. Remembering the film, ‘When she is this hot, you get one shot,’ a movie he had watched with his parents before then left for their business trip came into his mind. Remembering that his mother had left a voice message saying that they had extended their business trip, he did not have to worry about being interrupted from outside. Mads continued to approach him till she was standing only a few inches away. Placing her hand on his chest, made him sweat even more. He watches helplessly as she slowly move her lips towards him, even more forward than Icelyn whom only playfully flirts. Suddenly feeling a sharp pain between the legs, he falls onto the floor, yelping in pain. Clearly, he had been kicked between the legs. It hurts so bad even in virtual reality. If anyone was in his house, they would have heard him yelp by now.
Slowly getting up, still feeling the sharp pain which not only temporarily paralysed him but also almost causing him to vomit. He noticed her cutesy demeanour now has a cruel edge. To confirm this, she punches him between the legs, causing him to fall to the ground. What is he going to do?
Drawing out his indigo sword, he pushed himself off the ground, charging at her with it. Mads easily evades him by floating into the sky, landing on the ground a thousand metres away from him. Knowing that he needs speed to defeat her, he transforms into an Indigo Ursavus Elemensis. He leaps towards her and swats her with his paw.
“I love you, Mr Snuggles!” She hugged his snout after evading his paw swipe, making him feel wanted on the inside. Feeling her hand stroke him head and fur as he is in his animal hair, he purred with affection. Slowly turning back to his human form, placing both his arms around her, he suddenly feels a sharp pain in the ribs.
Almost instantly, he steps back in pain, feeling like the Asian parahuman, Donald Ceng Xiong Azuma, whom has left the Asian Bad Boyz gang. The feeling of confusion immediately hit his mind, prompting him to ask a question aloud. “W-what did I do?!”
“Never leave me again, Mr Snuggles?! She glared at him the same way Madison Clements did at Donald Ceng Xiong Azuma. Despite never having a girlfriend before, his cyber experience made him able to relate to his peers who have girlfriends especially feisty ones. Almost immediately, she disappeared and he was surrounded by red utah raptors.
“This land looks nothing more like the planet of the hats!” He scream aloud as he slash at them with the indigo sword in his arm. Being a warrior with thirty indigo stars above his head, which he noticed through briefly looking at his reflection by looking at his sword, he had no problem cutting down the dinosaurs. Finally, an orange giant theropod arrived roaring at him. With two tiny arms with two fingers, two powerful hind legs with three fire toes and one hind toe with a claw each, and a powerful tail with a body that looks like she is heavier than Sue, the largest T rex discovered. Female theropods are heavier than their male counterparts, something which is undoubtedly part of his animal knowledge.
Stepping backwards as the tyransaurus slowly walks towards him, he makes a dash for it, as soon as the dinosaur looked the other way briefly. A huge bright green flying reptile, with wings, four legs with like a Chinese dragon, and weighs 3 tonnes with a 66 foot long body, including it’s neck and tail, killed the orange theropod. The sky turned green again as the bright green dragon turned into his human form with bright green armor, revealing himself to be the Bright Green Dragon Knight. “It looks like somebody is trying to become the owner of this Fantasy Forum without me, eh? Nobody in this forum turns the skies green but me.”
“Are you joking or are you saying this just to mock me?! There are literally millions in this forum. Anyone can claim ownership if they decide they want to try!” An angry Falcon, drawing his sword, placing it at the Bright Green Knight’s neck.
“Calm down. I was just messing with you. Remember when said we will conquer this Forum together? I still need your help. Besides you are too good of an asset to lose. If I win, you will be my assistant. If you win, I win too. Let’s keep working together, we will have a win/win situation. Watch out! Mads is coming for you!” Turning around, he saw the bright green sword go through her heart, causing her body to be instantly disintegrated. If the attack had come a second too late, he would have probably died or worst still be unable to leave the Fantasy Forum as his body would undergo mutation.
“Thank you for your help, Mr Knight or shall I say Bridget Green Knight.” Breathing a sigh of relief as he has seen claws and teeth briefly reveal themselves to him. This indicates that the computer generated Mads can easily turn a user into an animal beast or more like a vampire or any type of cryptic. But anyway, wouldn’t it be better to become an animal than to be a human if you are the kind who hates the company of people. These are the thoughts which are flowing through Falcon’s mind.
“No sweat but we had better move on as time is not going to wait for us. Silence is golden but time waits for no man.”
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Post by Hardcastle on Apr 13, 2023 14:03:53 GMT
Hey OGG, I was curious and copy and pasted your chapters into a word counter, seems they are mostly under 1000 words.
I'm currently writing a book myself and researching "the craft" and most sources say under 1000 words is too short and chapters should actually be between 3000 and 5000 words. What do you think about that? Does it factor into your consideration at all? I seem to write chapters around 4000 words naturally, I actually thought even that was a little short, but that's for a fairly serious non-fiction. Still, many sources say even for fiction 1000 or under is too short.
I will say I'm contemplating writing some fiction one day too ...
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Post by oldgreengrolar on Apr 13, 2023 20:10:42 GMT
On a story writing forum, three thousand is the average number of words an author can write.
Some say that 1000 words is no problem for a beginner.
One thousand words is for an ameteur like myself. At the moment, I am trying to get my ‘show don’t tell’ mode right.
Do you suggest I try to push it beyond?
I have seen one who wrote a 50 word story.
But thanks for your feedback. It is hard to write beyond a certain point without a beta reader.
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Post by oldgreengrolar on Apr 14, 2023 11:37:17 GMT
Also I used to have some sleep aphnea problem which I am recovering from which I why I find it hard to write beyond a certain number of words before nodding off, more often than now. As I get better I will be able to write longer stories . If you see different flirty women: they represent different versions of a female friend of mine 😁.
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Post by oldgreengrolar on May 27, 2023 1:44:53 GMT
Interlude: The last blue star.
A huge blue creature, five hundred times bigger and heavier than the largest sperm whale on earth, emerged from the sparkling blue ocean, unleashing bright blue ultrasound energy from his body. The bright blue energy is visible to the naked eye, initially appears as a huge bright blue donut, expanding till it leaves the planet, generating sound much louder than a jet plane on earth, louder than the loudest sperm whale on earth. Once ten rings has been unleashed, the bright blue energy balls around the other animals disappears. The huge blue sperm whale submerges under water while all the animals continued their activity. Some playing, some searching for food elsewhere.
Jumping into the waters, swimming towards a jellyfish as large as a female blue whale, biting it's bell, a male blue ice bear, the strongest land animal, larger than an African elephant dragged it out of the waters on the ice pack, tearing up the jellyfish to pieces, eating away at it. Seeing a pack of neon blue running hyenas surrounding him as well as wolves and foxes with the same colour, he immediately chased them off by glaring at them with a growl. "This is only for these who serve the Three Creators. You all belong to Evil Black Death. Get out of here or feel the wrath of my paw!"
"To da loo sucker! You may be the strongest land animal but it has only made you megalomaniacal. In fact you bullied us and stole our kills way before we were given the gift of speech and reason." The leader of wolf pack called out as he fled with his pack, the running hyenas, and foxes.
Returning to his feast, ignoring the taunts of the wolf leader, he remembered the day before he had the gift of speech and reason. Being the largest of the male blue ice bears, he had often stolen their food and if even a small male blue ice bear is able to fight off multiple opponents, what more he himself. In fact this male blue ice bear fought off whole prides of neon blue American lions, chasing them out of the arctic circle. This same male blue ice bear knocked out Evil Black Death, formerly Green Light Bearer, who was going around tempting the animals, around planet Diamond. Before being given the gift of speech and reason, he had defeated the former dominant male which looks more like a giant male Eurasian neon blue bear, scaled up version of an European brown bear, when he was only eight, one year after he became fully grown. He is the great great great great great great great great great ancestor of the last blue star.
Many years later, long after becoming a blue star, the last male blue ice bear knocked Green Light Bearer, in his pale green smilodon form out of the solar system after becoming one with the last blue star.
“I wish that all animals could really talk. Then me Falcon will be really happy.” Closing the book, Falcon walked up to the television, turning it on.
After watching the news, where a blonde hair and blue eyed reporter was on, he kept the tv on, looking at the internet on his phone, using his online pay pal to protect his bank account card number from being copied, he purchased the Virtual Reality Forum. Reading the summary, he realise that it is the inverse version of the Blue Diamond Kingdom book.
Hours later, lying down on the couch, looking up in the sky, remembering the existence of the last blue star in the sky only weeks ago, he wandered if the book he read is actually real. The average blue star is at least three times the size of the sun, possessing a much greater gravity pull. It is the hottest and brightest celestial body in the universe. “Wouldn’t it be too hot for a polar bear to merge with a star ? This does not make sense.”
“Yet with the Three Creators, all things are possible.” Only yesterday, a random blond hair, blue eyed man whom passed him the ‘Blue Diamond Kingdom book’ told him that.
Opening the book, turning to the page where the last male blue ice bear fell asleep for three months after all the other male blue ice bears became one with the blue stars before being raptured permanently into the Blue Diamond Kingdom. Many male blue ice bears were sent to destroy random planets and solar systems. Receiving bright blue ultrasonics before falling asleep for three months. Within these three months, Blue Burning Fire, the Third Creator, took the last male blue ice bear to different multiverses. To Falcon’s surprise, the last male blue ice was given permission to destroy these multiverses with only a single neon blue mouth blast, stronger than any Dragonball character or any fictional character put together.
Closing the book looking into the night sky which only purple, white, green, yellow, orange, and red stars. Tugging himself under his blanket, looking into the sky again finding that only Uranus, Naptune, and Pluto are the only blue stars lefts left in what you call the dark sky in the night. “What did I just read? It is like I am Bizzaro world literally.”
Remembering the invitation to become a follower of the Three Creators, Falcon closed the book he had just read only moments ago. It was only months ago when he had that had the opportunity to become a blue star warrior by the same weird blond hair and blue eyed man who was standing beside his African Swedish wife. Receiving the book, initialky wanting to throw it away until he remembered the disappearance of the last blue star from the sky.
In order to fall asleep, he began counting sheep which are jumping over the moon, something that will never happen in their lifetime at all, unless some high technological item which is powerful enough to enable him to get into that situation in just a second.
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Post by oldgreengrolar on May 27, 2023 5:14:51 GMT
Chapter 12: The inverse George.
Remembering the last time he read the book on the last male blue ice bear smacking the pale green smilodon to the ground before destroying the solar system after becoming one with the last blue star, he knew that it was only the Third Creator, Blue Burning Fire whom stopped the same male blue ice bear from destroying the whole universe. This is because that male blue ice bear has been sent by Blue Burning Fire to destroy all other multiverses. Trying his best to shake off the memory, he was unable to, even while following Bright Green Dragon to the Land of Lola. On the way, he saw many still fighting each other. The fields seem to be greener than ever and so is the sky which has turned light pine green. Moments ago, the sky was blue before he had entered the land of Mads. Putting the two and two together, he realise that every time a land was conquered and taken over, it the sky on the outside of the lands become greener.
“The sky was cyan a while back. What has happened? Only moments ago, it was blue, now it has turned from cyan to pine green.” These words from a random user confirmed Falcon’s suspicions.
“We are at the entrance of the Land of Lola. Are you still focusing on the sky’s colour change? We have plenty of time for that but first, we need to conquer more land.” The voice of Bright Green Dragon, whom he now considers an online friend, snapped him out of his thoughts and observation.
Following his online friend, through the green door, the first opponent they had to encounter was a yellowish white armored bear named ‘George’. Looking like the armored polar bear from Golden Compass, he was wearing gold armor. Despite green blood coming out of his wounds that were inflicted by the users, some of them forming teams in an attempt to take him down, the yellowish white bear was not ready to fall. Watching in horror that despite the increase of green blooded wounds, inflicted by arrows and swords as well as bullets, he was still at peak strength. Immediately, he remembered reading a book which contains a cross over between Iorek Byrnison and the Dragonball universe.
That same bear looks more like Iorek Byrnison in the tv series ‘his dark materials.’ That armored polar bear turned bright blue after wishing an ocean blue shenron with pink eyes to unleash his full power beyond the deities. In an alternate version, that male bright blue armored polar bear destroyed the Dragonball multiverse in the process of killing a black orb with cyan blue eyes, avenging his homeworld.
Looking around for Bright Green Dragon Knight, he was nowhere to be found. A paw from ‘George’ narrowly hit him. The only reason he escaped is because he turned into an indigo Falcon on time, evading that paw but it is still not enough to defeat that yellowish white armored bear. Swooping at George from above, Falcon transforms into an indigo polar bear, knocking down George from above. Landing a bite on his throat, surprise at his improved strength, tearing off the head of the yellowish white armored bear, killing it. Green blood gushed out of the neck before the yellowish white body collapse on the ground disappearing. The yellowish white head also disappeared. The armor became Falcon’s. His indigo polar bear form now wearing that golden armor.
Transforming back to his human self, he was surprise to see his armor is now a combination of both indigo and gold. Tapping the armor, he also discovered that he is able to fight and kill other users without asking their permission, something only Bright Green Dragon could do after killing off the indigo werewolf back in the Land of Icelyn.
“Congratulations Falcon, I knew you could do it. This land by far is the hardest land to be conquered.” Bright Green Dragon whom had abruptly disappeared now appeared in front of him.
“Where have you been? We could have won together!” Despite being happy to see his online friend, he was also angry that he had abandoned him in the heat of battle. He never thought he would be the one to take down George or more correctly the Inverse George given the lore of this land is the inverse of the Peridot Princess story.
“Calm down, Falcon Knight. A male polar bear will always beat a smilodon populator male or female. Sure a smilodon populator is unrivalled in terms of strength among big cats but as even you can see, a big male polar bear is too much for it. To answer your question, I left as I just want you to unleash your full potential which surpasses mine.” Speaking in a voice that calms Falcon down, something which was successfully done.
Choosing to ignore the inner voices telling him that Green Light Bearer is a liar and even when telling a truth, has a lying spin to it, decides to trust him. After all, he would not have realise his full potential if he had not been forced to unleash his inner indigo polar bear with green eyes. “Alright Bright Green Dragon, I will forgive you this time. Tell me what you have done.”
“Look around you. The sky is green as ever but I have a present for you.” Immediately, he threw the head of Princess Lola in front of him. The head disappeared into dust and so did the body in green dress which was beside him, something Falcon only noticed a few seconds ago.
Realising that he was not the one to win ownership over the Land of Lola, he followed Bright Green Dragon wondering around the land, helping him to enslave all the fictional characters along the way. They all bowed down to Bright Green Dragon instead of him. “Let this be a lesson learn. Fight smart not hard. George is only a distraction to the real target, Princess Lola! Yes, I drag her towards me using telekenesis.”
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Post by oldgreengrolar on May 27, 2023 9:41:56 GMT
Chapter 13: Green sky.
Coming out of the Land of Lola, Falcon noticed that the sky has turned pure green just like the sky in planet Namek. Growing up with Dragonball anime’s, he knows it inside out. “This sky has become pure green. It is as if I am in planet Namek. Except the plants is still green and so is the grass. It is almost as if we are in planet Jade, a planet where animals that are supposed to be big are small and insects that are suppose to be small are big. The only whales on that planet is the tiny whale which is a scaled down version of earth’s largest whale. A man can hold that whale in his hands. Like all baleen whales, females are larger than males but they bleed green.”
“And you seem to know that book inside out. You have been reading it but you only consider it a comic, don’t you?” Following Bright Green Dragon Knight towards the Land of Simone whom had given him a tour around the Land of Lola moments ago, actually stopped for a brief second allowing Falcon to catch up to him before talking to him.
“I just consider it a comic but some things have brought me doubt. The sky here has turn green and the lore in this virtual reality seems to be the inverse of that book.”
“That is right, it is real but not the way you think it is. I have another book you can read if you like. It is where all stories follow subliminally. There are some conspiracy theorist out there. In other words, they aim to confuse you.” Falcon was confused listening to these words coming out of Bright Green Dragon’s mouth.
“What do you mean by real but not the way you think?”
“You will know once you conquer the Land of Simone and Edith. These are the last two lands in this forum. If you can conquer the heavily guarded Land of Lola, the new two are not going to be a problem or at least not much of a problem. Now close your eyes and see this.”
Closing his eyes, he felt a hand on his head, no doubt belonging to Bright Green Dragon. Immediately, he felt a sense of peace, leaving the world behind. Immediately, he found himself on a planet with a lime green sky, bright green ocean, and yellow green soil as well as grass. Going around the planet, noticing there are no eagles nor green ice bears. The animals on the planet ran into portals to earth before getting destroyed. The animals there made their home on earth, breeding with the animals on earth that are without the gift of speech and reason. “I am on planet Peridot!”
Falcon immediately opened his eyes, finding himself back on the same spot he was before he closed his eyes. Bright Green Dragon’s hand is still on Falcon’s head. “Have you have a good look at what has happened. Do you know why the sky will turn green on earth soon. This should be convincing enough for you.”
“This is convincing enough for me. The animals on the planet are running to earth for safety but why are there no green peridot bears, eagles, and cetaceans ? The only cetaceans there are the pakicetus, basilosaurus, and these so and so, the extinct ones.”
“The ones absent are the ones that choose the megalomaniac side. In other words, I am going to need your help to defend the earth from destruction. That is what superheroes do and you are one. I know who you are, Falcon. I have been watching you. You have been rejected and nobody wants you because of your obsession in animals but I will be able to put that in good use. All you need to do is take this forum and become a real champion. You will be your own boss. Never again do you need to worry about money as I will give you more than your own parents ever could. Fame will be yours as well and you can take revenge on your bullies anytime you want?” Bright Green Dragon moves his head close to his ear and whispers to him softly.
“W-who are y-you?” Stuttering as someone whom he has never met in real life not only knows who he is but knows his life story.
“I am known by different names. Some call me Evil Black Death or Green Light Bearer. Others call me the dragon. Examples of them are Isbjorn Daelander. He is the one whom has given you the book right and another one is Eric. You have two of these books in fact, one which you left behind in a restaurant which you ate in alone.” The words of Bright Green Dragon are getting to Falcon, stirring the desires in his heart. The desire to take over the forum and making him feel as if he is understood.
“And off all things? Why did you choose to change into a pale green smilodon populator? Why do you like everything green?”
“That is because that was originally how I looked like. I was the brightest of the guards and the most handsome. I played music. I did not desire anything except to be promoted and that was not granted. Other inferior guards were promoted way before me!” The angry expression on Bright Green Dragon made Falcon fall backwards in fear. If Bright Green Dragon had not made a comfortable line cushion on time, he would have fallen on his butt.
Falcon was offered helping hand to get up from the ground, he accepted it, trusting Bright Green Dragon. “Where are you now?”
“I live in the body of someone whom is now known as the pale green knight. Soon all these crazy books will be banned! I already have the world in my hands. Why would I need this forum when you can have it. Just give yourself to me after you win. I mean a small sample of your blood and this forum is yours forever.” These are the words Bright Green Dragon offered before leading him to the Land of Simone.
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Post by oldgreengrolar on May 27, 2023 10:34:56 GMT
Chapter 14: The owner of the forum.
Walking towards the cyan door of the the Land of Simone, Falcon thought of the male blue ice bear smacking the pale green smilodon populator one last time. Feeling appreciated to be able to help the pale green knight, he entered the door without hesitation. Due to all his training, and with ten indigo stars now above his head, he is easily able to conquer the cyan land. Wondering why the land is cyan rather than orange, he remembered reading about Simone wearing an orange tank top with the word ‘Princess’ in the front. The exact colour of that word is cyan.
“Hello there Falcon Knight.” Turning around and spotting Simone, he drew his sword to cut off her head. Instead a cage fell on him, trapping him as it is made of the toughest metal. Spikes emerge from the bars pointing and moving towards him. Trying his best to cut the spines, it is useless. That is when he remembered the pale green knight’s warning that Simone is tricky.
With no way out, he transforms into a giant indigo polar bear, breaking out of the cage before charging and biting off Simone’s head. Watching as Simone disintergrated in the ground, he took a tour around the cyan land watching everything slowly turn green. Realising he won, he walked back out of the cyan door, now back in human form. Outside the door, he noticed the sky has turned lime green and the environment around him is like planet Peridot with the absence of water.
“Like what you see? This is how planet Peridot looks like. Don’t worry about the Land of Edith. I have conquered it. Soon we are going to be announced as champions. We both own this Fantasy Forum.”
“What does the Land of Edith look like?”
“It has a purple door and I had to defeat two purple beasts that look like the ones in the Ussuri Tiaga. One is larger and stronger than the other……..”
“We have surprisingly two winners today. The owner of the Ussuri Tiaga is Falcon Knight!” The AI announced excitedly, contrary to her normally calm voice. She did not state why.
“It looks like you own this forum now. However, don’t forget to meet me and pay me what you owe. It is on your tab. In the meantime, enjoy it.” Disappearing a Falcon turned to look at him, he noticed the indigo stars above his head turned to a golden greenish crown. Now the owner of the Fantasy Forum, he is able to come and go as he like. In fact he is the boss and can hire anyone he wants and he does not have to reveal himself to them.
Heading to the office of the Pale Green Dragon in another country, Falcon discovered that the Blue Diamond Kingdom books has been banned. Anyone who mentions that book will be beheaded. However, he could not help hearing reports of people being raptured. Could they be raptured to the Blue Diamond Kingdom? These are the words that played in Falcon’s mind as he remembered Isbjorn Daelander telling him that. Regardless there is no turning back as he has already taken the Bright Green Dragon mark ? No as he has only signed a blood contract.
Now owning the forum, he is now dating his crush whom revealed that she is Panda all along and knew that he is Falcon by his mannerisms. In spite of Falcon trying his best to hide them at that time that is.
She told Falcon that she had tried many times to approach him to tell him about the Fantasy Forum but never got a chance to do so. Yet he has become the champion and become so much more confident than he has before. He now has the powers of Green Light Bearer which enables him to teleport anywhere he wants to.
Remembering his experience with hackers, he decides to hire some people whom would take turns to watch the Fantasy Forum. In this case there will be constant protection for the forum. He remembers the time he was almost hacked after coming out of the Land of Icelyn. If Panda, who is Birdie in real life had not warned him of that, he would not have an account today.
Setting a reset, Falcon made it possible for anyone to participate in any form of games and adventures they like but they will have to pay a premium package and never again will anyone have the option of gaining ownership of the Fantasy Forum. Curious at how the Land of Edith actually looked like, he gave the Land a reset. What he saw actually surprise them as he realise that Edith is the mother of his girlfriend. This brought back his memory to the time he went to her house for a party. Both him and Birdie were caught by her parents but instead of punishing her, they congratulated her and called themselves the ‘Inventors of Friday.’
The song on Friday Night by Katy Perry began playing in his head to the point he decided to chill by listening to the music audibly by turning on the television. Hopefully this will give him a break from the Fantasy Forum but not for long. There are only two things that will give him a break from that forum. One is being with his girlfriend. The second one is having a look and communicating with the animals which Evil Black Death has teleported to earth and hidden in various parts of the earth especially underground. While talking to these animals, he remembers the movie called Man in Black and he is dressed exactly like one of them right now. This is a secret he has kept from everyone including his parents. Only Birdie whom is part of them knows it.
How long will Falcon be the owner? This is something that only time will tell. However, he has sold something in exchange of it. What could it be? It is at least his soul but what profit is it if a man gains the whole world but loses his soul? This is a question which everybody must answer sooner or later.
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Post by oldgreengrolar on May 27, 2023 11:25:46 GMT
Epilogue.
The Fantasy Forum has expanded and grown in popularity internationally. In other words youth and even adults from various countries now participate in this forum. Among them is a man who has never left his room. Fat and overweight due to his depression that has resulted in an eating disorder, he finds his new home in the Fantasy Forum. His mother has tried many times to get him to socialise but he refused. Sitting in the basement watching television which is called his dark materials, watching as Iorek Byrnison gets his kingship in Svalbard back from Iofur Rakinson, his former best friend and long time rival. Both being armored polar bears, he remembers his former best friend whom has betrayed him in a party during high school but outing him secret embarrassing stuff which he keeps even from his parents. Seeing Iorek Byrnison destroy Iofur Rakinson not just in the tv series but also in the fanfiction where the former whom has become a male bright blue armored polar bear destroying his rival whom has wished to become a human put a smile on his face.
While watching the tv series, he remembers the book ‘Blue Diamond Kingdom’ which has already been banned. Yet he has kept one that has not been discovered despite the spot check by the government authorities. Taking the book which he has hidden under his couch, opening the book, he turns to the part where a male blue polar bear knocks the pale green smilodon to the ground before destroying the solar system after becoming one with the last blue star.
Immediately, he heard an unmistakable audible voice calling out to him. “Bobby, Bobby, why are you living like this. It is hard to kick against the goads right?”
“W-who are you?” He called out, looking around his basement but is unable to find anyone.
“I am Blue Burning Fire send by Bright Morning Star to lead, guide, and protect you. This is your last chance to make a decision which was always in your heart. Decide whom you will serve this day. The Blue Diamond Kingdom book has not been found as I have hidden it. Today, your mother has taken the mark and that is the end of her choice but you do not need to end up like her.” With nothing left to do, having heard preaching from Isbjorn Daelander for the past twenty years, he decided to obey the voice. Instantly, he was transported to a different place just as the little girl with blonde hair and blue eyes was transported to planet Diamond’s North Pole inhabited by male blue ice bears, the strongest land animals in the universe.
Bobby did not get transported to planet Diamond which has already been gone seconds before the last blue star has disappeared years ago. However, he found himself in an apartment unit led by Isbjorn Daelander whom he had heard about for a long time.
“Welcome there, Bobby, we have been expecting you.” Bobby could hardly hide his surprise as Isbjorn Daelander, now passed his middle age with white hair, sitting on a wooden chair, directly facing him, who is sitting in a circle with at least ten other people, including him.
“H-how did you know I will come here today ?”
“We have a relationship with Blue Burning Fire who told us you will come. We can teach you about him but first you must accept Bright Morning Star as your Lord and Saviour.” Knowing that it is now or never, Bobby listened to Is Isbjorn, accepting Bright Morning Star as his Lord and Savior. The only other option would be to accept the Bright Green Dragon mark.
“I feel as if I am glowing blue.” Feeling a sense of freedom, he could see his hands glowing blue.
“That is because Blue Burning Fire now lives in you. You have now become a star warrior. A blue star warrior as one of the blue star warrior’s power has been transferred to you. He has gone to the Blue Diamond Kingdom after being beheaded by the Bright Green Dragon. Terrible times are coming but he who endures till the end will be saved.”
Closing his eyes, he sees male blue ice bears destroying random multiverses. He interprets it as the real deal will soon destroy everything that is a counterfeit and copies of the real deal but he decides to get a confirmation from Isbjorn Daelander by telling him what he saw hiding nothing.
“It is as you say. And it confirms exactly what I told you a while ago. Please ask Blue Burning Fire who is your Teacher and will lead you into all truth.”
Hearing the door knock, softly at first but the sound grows louder and louder ending with a loud thud, he knew that the agents have found them. To enter the Blue Diamond Kingdom, he must never deny Bright Morning Star till the end, something which many are guilty for. Despite not being a star warrior for a long time, he had heard about it. This was the time when he had just finish an exam and was coming out of class together with his classmates. At that time, he had not yet been betrayed by his former best friend and has everything going well for him. That same friend warned him that if he accepts, their friendship will be non existent.
Memories of his former best friends betrayal came shortly after. This made him fall into a depression for a long time, avoiding all forms of social contact after high school. He only went to college to study and go home as he lived close to his family.
“Don’t worry, Bobby, I will never leave you nor forsake you.” This were the last words he heard before the door broke open and he was met with a bullet to the head, sending him to the otherworld. He had only been a star warrior for one day but he made it into the Blue Diamond Kingdom making it worth it.
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